Soaperlol (![[info]](http://p-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} soap_committee) wrote,@ 2008-04-23 09:13:00 |
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Critique Meme Result #1
I've had a fever for a couple of days (oddly no other symptoms) and I haven't felt like doing much but sleep. But based on your suggestions in the critique meme, I was inspired!
The full-size is NWS for artsy boobs. Yes...it's a pinup, which is contrary to much of what I said I'd do on my own time...but it started as figure practice and I liked where it was going.
Key things you advised me to be more conscious about:
+ More size variation in lineart widths (moar thin lines)
+ Try more graceful, delicate subjects and characters
+ Less idealized figures, for the love of God draw an A-cup, vary body types (I think her leg is still too long but oh well D:)
+ I tend to have TASTE THE RAINBOW colors within skin-tones, restrain them a bit to prevent the image from appearing overworked
+ Have backgrounds more often
...But crap. I forgot to address the lineart suggestion in this drawing (Seee, this is why I needed your critiques :B)...but what I draw next will focus just on that. So - thank you all very much for your help!
I've had a fever for a couple of days (oddly no other symptoms) and I haven't felt like doing much but sleep. But based on your suggestions in the critique meme, I was inspired!
The full-size is NWS for artsy boobs. Yes...it's a pinup, which is contrary to much of what I said I'd do on my own time...but it started as figure practice and I liked where it was going. Key things you advised me to be more conscious about:
+ More size variation in lineart widths (moar thin lines)
+ Try more graceful, delicate subjects and characters
+ Less idealized figures, for the love of God draw an A-cup, vary body types (I think her leg is still too long but oh well D:)
+ I tend to have TASTE THE RAINBOW colors within skin-tones, restrain them a bit to prevent the image from appearing overworked
+ Have backgrounds more often
...But crap. I forgot to address the lineart suggestion in this drawing (Seee, this is why I needed your critiques :B)...but what I draw next will focus just on that. So - thank you all very much for your help!
